First DNB Track produced

[Chaz D]

Eaz guys.
Made my first DnB tune.
Its up on my myspace.- www.myspace.com/chazd
Would really appreciate it if i could have some feedback.
Track is called Under The Bridge, It's only a demo so its not quite finished yet, I just wanted something up on my page!
Let me know what ya think!
Safe, Chaz.

 

[Bay]

easy m8,

yeh listening to your demo tune now, like the intro and the low vocals but goes abit off with the chord seq. maybe a few more variations, drums are ok.

keep it up man,

b

 

[Chaz D]

easy m8,

yeh listening to your demo tune now, like the intro and the low vocals but goes abit off with the chord seq. maybe a few more variations, drums are ok.

keep it up man,

b

Eaz bro.
Cheers for the feedback.
Gonna give it another try, I'll deffinatly try and give it a few more variations.
Thanks again.
Chaz.

 

[Chaz D]

bump

 

[toxysweden]

Yo i agree with BAY.

I thinK the vocals and the chords dont fit well in this choon.. I think you might need to scrap that idea and try something else keep at it bigupz !