DnB Finally finished it

[Morah]

i Posted a version of this track up a while ago, it took an age for me to get it to a point where I felt it was mixed properly

would love to know what you all think?

https://soundcloud.com/lowrmusic%2Fseparate

Low:r

 

[WhoSayReload?]

Really feeling this one mate, it's what I would call a 'floaty tune', great drums, great ambience!!

 

[Misti]

Really nice push / pull vibes on this one man good job. Lead doesn't sound too resonant, and the vocals are soft without sounding abrasive. At a glance the subs could rattle a bit harder but could be down to personal taste. A lot of your other tunes are rollin man big up!

 

[Morah]

Thanks both of you,

Really nice push / pull vibes on this one man good job. Lead doesn't sound too resonant, and the vocals are soft without sounding abrasive. At a glance the subs could rattle a bit harder but could be down to personal taste. A lot of your other tunes are rollin man big up!

i had some issues with the sub on this one as I didn't use a straight up waveform. thanks for the complement on the other tunes aswell

 

[Misti]

i had some issues with the sub on this one as I didn't use a straight up waveform.

Could it be worth slicing the sub from whatever synth you were using and replacing the fundamentals with a sine wave? Can make a big difference if you're planning on spinnin this one at any point

 

[Morah]

Yeah that's a good point. its something I've done in the past but for this project i think it slipped my mind. i was thinking about saving up for one of those subpacs at some point then i can make better decisions regarding the subs in the future.

 

[maschinistom]

hi ben, very decent track from you again. i love the intro, and the chords progression / melo are very nice, indeed.
for me (on my system) the cymbals stick out way too much, maybe it sounds OK for your side but I would turn those down or EQ.
I also suggest to put the lead e-paino in a different room, a bit farther away from its current position .. would enhance the dreamy feel of the track.
otherwise, you again proof to be well ahead the pack in this forum section here, keep it up ...

 

[Manu Forti]

Never fail to impress Low:r

Bit dreamy for my personall tastes but i think the mix sounds tight.

 

[Morah]

@maschinistom i had a lot of issues with mixing this tune, i believe it was due to me picking dodgy samples to begin with. its one of those tunes that i don't want to hear anymore haha so i don't think il be going back to it anytime soon.
@ManuForti Cheers I've got some roller/darker tracks on the go il post them up soon

Low:r

 

[Centrepoint]

Really good tune, the vibes right up my street, not enough liquid in this forum imo.

I see you've used a 'majestic' avatar on soundcloud...is this on their playlist?

 

[Morah]

Really good tune, the vibes right up my street, not enough liquid in this forum imo.

I see you've used a 'majestic' avatar on soundcloud...is this on their playlist?

Thanks I agree there needs to be more liquid.
its up on their channel at the moment:

 

[Centrepoint]

Thanks I agree there needs to be more liquid.
its up on their channel at the moment:

Nice, really cool to see there are established artists on here...loving that. Also like the fact you are humble (not sure if that's the right word) enough to want our opinion's on your work...liking that.

 

[Morah]

Thanks There is always room for improvement i still learn something new every time i make a track that's never changed.
Places like this are really good for finding new tips and tricks also i love the community vibe.

Ben