Dreamland Remix, not sure what catagory it comes under

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Robert G, Jun 22, 2010.

  1. Robert G

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  2. Robert G

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    Come on people i want to enter this into a comp lol.
     
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    i think u need to beef up the snare quite a lot... definately some layers on the drums.. some breaks to make it roll through nicely.
    some more variation would be good.. im not overly fond on the bassline synths u have going but they sound quite good.. just add some more variation and different synths.. with some fx over the top too.
     
  4. Robert G

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    Nice one buddy.
     
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    Zeal Ohm/C2D/Dark Asylum/Ennex

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    Intro was ok, snare defo needs some low mids to it give it some weight imo

    Not overally keen on the bass

    Bit too jump uppy for me personally
     
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    I reckon you need to make some more space for the vocals when the bass drops. Treat it more like a rock song that happens to have drum and bass elements.
     
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    sorry mate i think this version is worse. the melody on the bassline i find really irritating. and the vocals just dnt fit the rest of the song. the drums need some more layers too.
    dnt mean to be negative mate just being honest!
     
  9. Robert G

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    Yeah i know, i picked the shittest tune in the world to remix lol, gonna get on with something else and call this one a day lol.