Doubts about a tune

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Had this one in the works for a while now, I've got the idea down but now i have it in front of me I'm not too sure on it, any feedback would be greatly appreciated.

Private link at the moment as obviously I'm not sure if i want it up without consulting some proper heads first

soundcloud.com/caaza/flipside/s-aWSu7
 
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