Dizzee Rascal - Sirens bootleg remix (i can hear the SIRUS coming)

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by SIRUS, Jul 14, 2007.

  1. SIRUS

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    http://www.mediafire.com/?7qzyynxldej

    this is my first draft, so i'm looking for comments for improvement, tips on producing it tighter, that sort of thing...

    so feel free to slate or rate.

    oh and can someone tell me if the lyrics need tightening, i'm not happy with them in some places, never worked with a full vocal set and the time stretching was a bastard so i kind of just settled for what i had done so i could do other bits.

    gonna give it a few weeks before i go back and try and finish the track, so comments will be valuable.