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- Feb 16, 2007
http://www.mediafire.com/?7qzyynxldej
this is my first draft, so i'm looking for comments for improvement, tips on producing it tighter, that sort of thing...
so feel free to slate or rate.
oh and can someone tell me if the lyrics need tightening, i'm not happy with them in some places, never worked with a full vocal set and the time stretching was a bastard so i kind of just settled for what i had done so i could do other bits.
gonna give it a few weeks before i go back and try and finish the track, so comments will be valuable.
this is my first draft, so i'm looking for comments for improvement, tips on producing it tighter, that sort of thing...
so feel free to slate or rate.
oh and can someone tell me if the lyrics need tightening, i'm not happy with them in some places, never worked with a full vocal set and the time stretching was a bastard so i kind of just settled for what i had done so i could do other bits.
gonna give it a few weeks before i go back and try and finish the track, so comments will be valuable.