Daybreaks - Deep Roots WIP

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by foeddd, May 18, 2013.

  1. foeddd

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    this is the first "dark" track i made. what do you think?
     
  2. subprime

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    Sounds good, doesn't sound very 'dark' over here, and it all sounds like an intro so far. Need to hear a bit more to add anything else.
     
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    Intro is very good, waiting for more :)
     
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    JimpaDirt Vettvilling

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    I'll have to agree with the others here. Altho I think it's sounding great when all the stuff comes in, it has a nice swing to it. As subprime said, its quite a short cut with mostly only the buildup in it so it's hard to get any opinion on the track.
     
  5. foeddd

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    thanks all. and yes there need to happen alot more on this track just started it.
     
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    Wow, this has vibes, I like it. But, you could add some pads to add atmosphere, and maybe some subtle layers of lead near the drop to add a little tension :) Cheers, and good luck with this!
     
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    Damn, I look forward to hearing more. Real good so far :rslayer: