Cyclopyze - Dante's Inferno

[Cyclopyze]

Just finished this song. It's basicly the 1. ''finished'' thing i made in FL so it may be a bit off production wise, but im happy with the idea aspect of it. Thoughts, advice and basicly anything is appreciated. Thx in advance.

http://www.soundclick.com/player/single_player.cfm?songid=10634262&q=hi

 

[Cyclopyze]

bumpy

 

[ali^]

cool idea, well done on actually getting something finished. i think the drums (snare in particular) should be brought up a bit louder.
have you thought about dropping the tune without the realy high end patch over it? mind sound nice to give that bit a little rest at some points, maybe take it out for the first drop to emphasize the base in it

 

[Cyclopyze]

Thx for that.

That sound is there for vibe but i reckon it might get a bit annoying since it's high-pitched, il try to take it out at some parts, put it an octave lower and maybe put it more in the background rather than front as it is now. Gonna pump those drums aswell and post the new ver. later on.