DnB Could I get some feedback on this tune?

[XenfleX]

Hey guys,

Could I get your thoughts/feedback on this tune and how I could improve the mixdown?

http://soundcloud.com/xenflex/interstellar

By the way is this the right place to post this kind of thread?

Thanks,
XenfleX

 

[neddez]

By the way is this the right place to post this kind of thread?

No