Just listened your tune the beats on da intro are pretty cool, an the beats in general are pretty good, your need to work on the bassline tho it dont have much substance to it and its generally quite basic. your on the right lines tho keep it up!
Please rate my tunes there on the new talent page under dj sc.
yeah not bad for a first attempt mate. more than i can do anyway. sc is right though you need to have more substance to your basslines but other than that you sound like you are gettin somewhere. safe raar