Bulletstorm - Deathspank

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by bulletstorm, Jun 8, 2012.

  1. bulletstorm

    bulletstorm Member

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    Hi guys,

    I was working on a different tune but it was going nowhere so I started working on a new tune and I like this one much better =)
    I'm not really feeling the drop, so maybe anyone here has a nice idea for it.
    anyway, I hope you enjoy it =)

     
  2. IV4

    IV4 Currently a newt.

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    Try utilizing space right before your drop. A Bit of silence. You could also try something to build tention like one of those drum rolls you got in there slowly then quickly pitch shifted or low low passed with the filter opening. Only ideas I could suggest.
    Over all I like your song. I think you could use more variety in melody and bass notation. Only complaint.
     
  3. jimjimjim

    jimjimjim oldskool

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    yo
    love those drums - specially those banging bass drums. nice.
    didnt feel the intro tho man sorry
    peace
     
  4. bulletstorm

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    intro's are always my weak spot. with this track I think the intro itself is pretty decent but the disappointing drop makes it look bad haha.
    but there need to be some changes, IV mentoined something useful =)

    it's pretty hard because my counterpart is away to another country for 6 months so my last three tracks were solo productions.
    he is good at making intro's and drops while the only thing I'm good at is sweet drums haha.
     
  5. mr meh

    mr meh Well-Known Member

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    Yeah those drums are tough, tune is dark

    not too keen on how it rolls into the drop like that tho, like IV4 said it needs some tension there for a tune like this imo