i think ur kick has way too much low end...need to cut around 60/70hz to give the sub some room
in fact u need to eq everything...the lil sound effects going on throughout are in the way of the sub/bass synth..
its making ur kick n snare sound muddy n weak in comparison to the track, some decent ideas goin on, but its not making me interested
experiment with transition and variations throughout the track.
hope this helps!