A track iv'e been working on...

[risto orpus]

A track iv'e been working on, if you don't mind taking a listen and dropping some critique i would appreciate it alot, thanks

https://soundcloud.com/risto-orpus-112123016%2F5a-1

 

[Hmmm]

Ok well this one is well mixed well written. The only complaint i have is a personal preference... the hallow sounding snare. I was choose a different sound. But thats it.
https://soundcloud.com/mc_abyss%2Flazer-damage

 

[risto orpus]

Thanks for the advice is this better*

https://soundcloud.com/risto-orpus-112123016%2F5-improved