vick, what do you mean 'roller'? there is absolutely nothing rolling about this tune. its solid 2step, do you even know what a roller is?
anyway about the tune, the break is fat and the bass is meat. really well defined, from waht i can hear on these earbuds. did you make that break?
i think youre giving too much away too soon, have a weaker break running in the intro
and drop the real break when the bass drops. im not a fan of two note pads, i like the pad sound itself though.