Dark, A bit minimal and creepy track

[JimpaDirt]

So I don't usually make this kind of tunes but I felt like exploring some new sounds and techniques. Im not a hundred percent comfortable with how it sounds like but I don't know whats the bad parts in it and I thought that some of you who might be more into the genre could point me in the right directions of where to go from here, luvz <3

http://soundcloud.com/jimpadirt/disturbance

Heres the newer version:

http://soundcloud.com/jimpadirt/disturbance-ver-2

[Mr Fletch]

Id take the reverb and release down on all the bass sounds, and turn the snare into a high frequency click, or clap. Apart from that, I'd leave everything else as it is.

[modish]

big track

[JimpaDirt]

Thanks for yer feedback fletch! Im gonna see what I can do with that and now that i listen back to it I feel like the snare is quite terrible haha.

big track? well thank you mod :p

[`Matt]

I think a proper hard snare used here and there could work wonders aswell.

[JimpaDirt]

Got a newer version up now so I just thought I'd bump this thread

I made the bass less more dry tho I kept a bit of delay, extended the ending a bit and got a snap and a clap instead of a snare. And some other minor adjustments!

[horace111]

Sounds good man, I agree with what the others said though. Love the kick pattern in the second part btw (:
Keep it up!

[JimpaDirt]

Thanks for the up's man. Glad u liked it!

[IV4]

So far I love the funk. Those little computer harmonics are fun. This track is fun. Simple and fun. good work.