Dark, A bit minimal and creepy track

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  1. JimpaDirt

    JimpaDirt Vettvilling

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    So I don't usually make this kind of tunes but I felt like exploring some new sounds and techniques. Im not a hundred percent comfortable with how it sounds like but I don't know whats the bad parts in it and I thought that some of you who might be more into the genre could point me in the right directions of where to go from here, luvz <3



    Heres the newer version:

     
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  2. Mr Fletch

    Mr Fletch aka KRONIX

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    Id take the reverb and release down on all the bass sounds, and turn the snare into a high frequency click, or clap. Apart from that, I'd leave everything else as it is.
     
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    big track
     
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    Thanks for yer feedback fletch! Im gonna see what I can do with that and now that i listen back to it I feel like the snare is quite terrible haha.

    big track? well thank you mod :p
     
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    I think a proper hard snare used here and there could work wonders aswell.
     
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    Got a newer version up now so I just thought I'd bump this thread :)

    I made the bass less more dry tho I kept a bit of delay, extended the ending a bit and got a snap and a clap instead of a snare. And some other minor adjustments!
     
  7. horace111

    horace111 My name is Jago ↑

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    Sounds good man, I agree with what the others said though. Love the kick pattern in the second part btw :)
    Keep it up!
     
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    Thanks for the up's man. Glad u liked it!
     
  9. IV4

    IV4 I didn't vote for him!

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    So far I love the funk. Those little computer harmonics are fun. This track is fun. Simple and fun. good work.
     

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