Zulishanti - Likwid

[Zulishanti]

Hey guys, this is actually an old song that i went back and slightly redid because my friend remixed and is releasing it tomorrow, looking for technical feedback, much appreciated as always

https://soundcloud.com/https%3A%2F%2Fsoundcloud.com%2Fzulishanti%2Flikwid

 

[ApeCat]

I think it takes far too long for any rhythmic elements to kick in and I think the drums sound kind of shoddy, there's nothing that sounds particularly bad, but there's nothing that grabs my interest either, once you've heard all the synths come in you've pretty much heard the whole tune.
B-line is really weak and takes far too long to come in, I'd look at the composition again and see what can be done to make it sound more interesting.