DnB Zian - East - Liquid

[Zian]

This is my first effort.

If I could get feedback on mixing, EQ and the composition that would be great.

I'm using Logic Express and mostly Massive.

Any other advice or feedback would be great

Thanks,

https://soundcloud.com/ziandnb%2Feast

For what it's worth I'm happy to give feedback on anyone's tracks just link to me

 

[Deleted member 85438]

There's good stuff here but I'd say your biggest problem is choice of timbre, not a fan of piano or really any of the synths. Percussion sounds okay but yeah bit constant/predictable. Some parts of the track seem to move along nicely but some just pain in my ears. Composition seems a bit slow/uninteresting but keep working on it, you have to read a lot, production is understanding composition/music theory/software/hardware/etc/etc/etc/etc

But yeah definitely let me know what I sound like I'm still just learning too.

 

[Zian]

Cheers for listening. I'm checking out 656 33 DnB on your soundcloud now. Will leave a comment on there

Mixed feelings and feedback on instruments. I'm more stuck figuring out layering/EQ'ing bass/snare but I'm going to work on a more Dancefloor/Neuro track next to get a better feel for Synthesis.

 

[Deleted member 85438]

thanks, i must say though its one of my least favourite tracks so far, i liked it better when it was just the bass you hear near the end and drums. I may even take it back to its roots.