ZeroZero - Fiction

[barnesy00]

https://soundcloud.com/zerozero00%2Ffiction-wip

New work in progress looking for feedback

 

[Neomind]

sweet drums man
not my cup of tea but, good job.
That main "reese-wob" could be a bit more stereo imo. Just that crit about the song.

Really nice drums man =)

 

[duttymonster]

agree with NEO ^^

i have the same problem with my 'reese-wobbles'

i guess stereo width on the higher end of the frequencies ist die antwort.

 

[barnesy00]

sweet drums man
not my cup of tea but, good job.
That main "reese-wob" could be a bit more stereo imo. Just that crit about the song.

Really nice drums man =)

niceone man yer needs some work still, how do you mean by the bass more stereo, like movement between left and right?

 

[Fishy:)]

Sounding good man I would add some more elements tho so it stays interesting

 

[EvezDroppin]

love ths style on this one.
love the bass. drums are rolling.
but the mixdown needs a bit of work, im not sure what, maybe just more elements in there and it will fill it out!

 

[dj cluster]

I would add some compression on snare and some variation... I like it!

 

[Sid Fidla James]

pretty good stuff dude.
as said before, a bit more variation would be nice
other thing i would suggest is overdriving high end of the reese some more, just to bring it out a little more.
good stuff though dude.

 

[barnesy00]

thanks for the words

 

[luciduk]

drums are great man, nice original roll on them! not a massive fan of the phaserd white noise floating about aimlessly it seems but the tune is good deffo.

 

[barnesy00]

nice one man, cant thinkwhat you mean by the white noise ive not put any in haha

 

[thenewfastlane]

Sounds great tbh, I cant hear any white noise myself. Perhaps its being mistaken for the higher frequency layer over the bass? Great track, although I feel it might need a bit more personality. Its difficult to say but it needs some thing unique in there to separate it from similar tunes, if you get me

 

[barnesy00]

yer thats what i was thinking with that high freq noise, i like it tho tbh, and yer im going to do a bit more work on it over the next few days to make it more unique, any ideas? im trying not to use a vocal sample cos ive used 1 in all my tunes so far but if i cant think of anything else to use i might use 1

 

[barnesy00]

gona try get this finished this weekend, any more tips/ideas?