ZeroZero - Fiction

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by barnesy00, Jan 23, 2011.

  1. barnesy00

    barnesy00 DJZeroZero

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    New work in progress looking for feedback
     
  2. Neomind

    Neomind Too many skulls!">:O

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    sweet drums man :)
    not my cup of tea but, good job.
    That main "reese-wob" could be a bit more stereo imo. Just that crit about the song.

    Really nice drums man =)
     
  3. duttymonster

    duttymonster deep in the jungle

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    agree with NEO ^^

    i have the same problem with my 'reese-wobbles'

    i guess stereo width on the higher end of the frequencies ist die antwort.
     
  4. barnesy00

    barnesy00 DJZeroZero

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    niceone man yer needs some work still, how do you mean by the bass more stereo, like movement between left and right?
     
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    Sounding good man:) I would add some more elements tho so it stays interesting
     
  6. EvezDroppin

    EvezDroppin how to change name,......

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    love ths style on this one.
    love the bass. drums are rolling.
    but the mixdown needs a bit of work, im not sure what, maybe just more elements in there and it will fill it out!
     
  7. dj cluster

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    I would add some compression on snare and some variation... I like it!
     
  8. Sid Fidla James

    Sid Fidla James Member

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    pretty good stuff dude.
    as said before, a bit more variation would be nice
    other thing i would suggest is overdriving high end of the reese some more, just to bring it out a little more.
    good stuff though dude.
     
  9. barnesy00

    barnesy00 DJZeroZero

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    thanks for the words
     
  10. luciduk

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    drums are great man, nice original roll on them! not a massive fan of the phaserd white noise floating about aimlessly it seems but the tune is good deffo.
     
  11. barnesy00

    barnesy00 DJZeroZero

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    nice one man, cant thinkwhat you mean by the white noise ive not put any in haha
     
  12. thenewfastlane

    thenewfastlane By The Low Road

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    Sounds great tbh, I cant hear any white noise myself. Perhaps its being mistaken for the higher frequency layer over the bass? Great track, although I feel it might need a bit more personality. Its difficult to say but it needs some thing unique in there to separate it from similar tunes, if you get me
     
  13. barnesy00

    barnesy00 DJZeroZero

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    yer thats what i was thinking with that high freq noise, i like it tho tbh, and yer im going to do a bit more work on it over the next few days to make it more unique, any ideas? im trying not to use a vocal sample cos ive used 1 in all my tunes so far but if i cant think of anything else to use i might use 1
     
  14. barnesy00

    barnesy00 DJZeroZero

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    gona try get this finished this weekend, any more tips/ideas?