DnB Zero Beats - Leaving Here

[JamesZero]

I've not posted much in this forum in quite a while! I've also not done any producing in years.

I decided to get back into it a bit recently and I have just finished off a track.

It's called Leaving Here and it would be good to get some opinions and feedback on it.

https://soundcloud.com/zerobeats%2Fzero-beats-leaving-here

 

[Altered Terrane]

Hey Zero, not bad. If you want my opinion: I would work on the drums a lil bit, the kick kind of disappears in the mix. Id also work on the sub a bit, maybe switch up the pattern or just work on the sound of it, so it doesnt get to repetitive (as its only a 2 key progression atm). some mastering would do it good.
Anyway, those are just my 2 cents, i think your song has potential! Keep at it

 

[Chapter11]

Yo man the vibe on this one is toooo smooth.

Loving the whole atmosphere on this ! I have to agree though that the drums and sub don't vibe well with the overall great work musically.

I do feel like the second half is the stronger of the two hooks, I'd definitely put the 2nd half 1st!

If you could feedback me too bro that would be great : https://dnbforum.com/threads/chapter-11-discarded-wip-feedback-appreciated.199632/

 

[Dumpster]

N0t bad byt n0t really my style!
But a g00d eff0rt!

 

[d-low]

have to agree with points about the drums they are very quiet and leave nothing to nod your head to. the music is awesome though tbh, can't fault any of the musical elements

 

[JamesZero]

Nice one for the feedback guys.

I was thinking of changing up the sub, it is pretty basic at the moment. I did try a few different patterns with it but they just sounded wrong. There is a slight sidechain on the kick at the moment to try and make it cut through a bit more, but I'll take more of a look into the drums as a whole to try and get it sounding better.

One of the things I always found hard about producing when I used to do it was the more musical side and melodies, so that was main aim with this track and getting back into it.

 

[Derelicts Of Tomorrow]

everything is great with the drums being the exception, very flat and lifeless i'm sorry to say