Zele - What You Need (Netsky, Redeyes style soulful liquid) would love some feedback!

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  1. that_fred_guy

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    would love to know what you guys thought of this, been working on it for a while
     
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    Re: Zele - What You Need (Netsky, Redeyes style soulful liquid) would love some feedb

    Woah love it mate.. Right up my street.. Few things though, i'd save the vocal for the first breakdown @18 seconds, and the bit that says 'dont look any further' seems to go out of time slightly.. But other than that good job :)
     
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    Re: Zele - What You Need (Netsky, Redeyes style soulful liquid) would love some feedb

    thanks a lot for the feedback, really good to hear that someone likes it haha! yeah that's probably a good idea, haven't really formed much of an intro hence the whole fading in/out thing. I know what you mean about that vocal, need to fix that somehow...
     
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    Very nice sound, i agree with the above and would probably work a bit on the intro.
     
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    thanks yogi! yeah I will work on the intro a bit more. by the way really like the tune in your sig, really really great vibes
     
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    Re: Zele - What You Need (Netsky, Redeyes style soulful liquid) would love some feedb

    Corrr yes mate! Liking this one :) Agree with Skuff, those vocals would be nice if they came in in the breakdown. Nice tune though dude! :D

    Could I be a cheeky boy and ask where to vocal is from? It has given me a tiny idea that might work :)
     
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    Re: Zele - What You Need (Netsky, Redeyes style soulful liquid) would love some feedb

    Listned to the track a couple of times and really like it. This could turn out to be a really great tune....and yes work on the intro...slow intro and wait with the vocal ....which by the way sounds really good.

     
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    Re: Zele - What You Need (Netsky, Redeyes style soulful liquid) would love some feedb

    awesome mate, feeling this alot :) just going to say exactly what others have said and leave out the vocals for the first 16. Top work though man!
     
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    Re: Zele - What You Need (Netsky, Redeyes style soulful liquid) would love some feedb

    loving all the feedback, thanks a lot everyone. Will take your advice on saving the vocal for the breakdown and I'll try and build a better intro. any more feedback would be hugely appreciated :)
     
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    Re: Zele - What You Need (Netsky, Redeyes style soulful liquid) would love some feedb

    agree about saving the vocal till the breakdown to increase the impact, nice tune mate feeling it
     
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    Re: Zele - What You Need (Netsky, Redeyes style soulful liquid) would love some feedb

    Ha it's funny to recognize some samples you took from the various artists mentioned. But nothing else to add man, really nice production it sounds good.
    The intro is kind of original with the changing levels of the high-hats. Cool tune! :)
     
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    I didn't sample Netsky or Redeyes if that's what you mean Nucloid (I think that would be cheating haha) but thanks!

    great feedback thanks guys...
     
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    Re: Zele - What You Need (Netsky, Redeyes style soulful liquid) would love some feedb

    that piano thing reminds me of raise your weapon
     
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    Re: Zele - What You Need (Netsky, Redeyes style soulful liquid) would love some feedb

    bump
     
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    Re: Zele - What You Need (Netsky, Redeyes style soulful liquid) would love some feedb

    nice tune ! good sounds... like the build up with the drums. Did you use an automated high pass filter for that
     
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    Re: Zele - What You Need (Netsky, Redeyes style soulful liquid) would love some feedb

    your production is good

    the intro is a bit weak, i dont like those lil 4th bar fills on the break

    i dont like the idea of looping the vox sample (you could easily halve it, or at the very least EQ it to sound flatter, maybe make it sound like it came from vinyl etc... right now it sounds like you've taken a sample and plunked it on top of the track)

    but the drop is nice, mixed well, sub is singing etc

    i think a flanger/phaser on that last bar at 1.00 would sound good
     
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    Re: Zele - What You Need (Netsky, Redeyes style soulful liquid) would love some feedb

    thanks! yep I used an automated filter :)

    thanks for the feedback! I agree the intro needs work for sure! as for the vocal...I kinda like the looping of it, kinda makes it more profound somehow. I agree with what you are saying about it in the mix, I think I need to take it down in a mix a bit, it's a bit too loud. but yeah thanks for all the feedback!
     
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    Re: Zele - What You Need (Netsky, Redeyes style soulful liquid) would love some feedb

    moved the vocal, put a bit of variation on the second drop and I think it's nearly done! put it on youtube, please watch several thousand times

     
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    sounds good mate but its already been done :p so so many times.

    i'd add some delay and verb to those vocals tho. make em reall dreamy.
     
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    really good tune, mate. I feel a little bit left alone at 2:11. That is the only thing, though.