I don't know how to tell you it is not very good. It has some great parts to it. It is not horrible. I can see what your are trying to do with it and the creativity is nice. However, I am afraid it still has that novel sound of bad mix, and repetition. Sorry for the negative comment. I hope you resize my intention is not bring you down but help uplift your abilities. You can get some of the best and honest critique from this site, and for me, I am a better producer because of it.
Well thankyou for your feedback, it really is honest feedback, because im 30 % pleased with my track i need to get to 100 % and honest feedback is exactly what helps me out so - im going to make some new sounds now and i will post some more, as soon i feel im @ 40 % take care