Your opinions on new tune?

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by JMDJ, Feb 4, 2009.

  1. JMDJ

    JMDJ Member

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    Hey all. heres another 1. this time pure jumpyness for yall ;)

    could progress even more just thought i'd put up here see what you all think.

    advice would be appreciated.

    sounds best loud ;)

    check it out!

    IN COVER - JAYEM

    http://www.dnbshare.com/download/Incover-JAYEM.mp3.html
     
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  2. KaztrO

    KaztrO New Member

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    Jeah man, I like it. It's not a very innovative tune but it don't have do be... You'll have to do a little more work on the mastering. "More Pressure". I also like the vocal shoot samples. So keep on goin' m8.

    Greetz
    KaztrO
     
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  3. Niceneasyuk

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    Big tune, sounds like jumpup just before it turned clownstep. i like the synth, i dunno about the sub bass (it's only 9 in the morning i don't wanna piss the neighbours off)
     
  4. DJ ASH

    DJ ASH I've been naughty, I'm banned

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    Thanks (a wicked tune man )

    Nice an wobbly, nice sounds (wish I could make a tune like that)

    BIG UP + KEEP EM COMING
    Cheers
     
  5. thin king

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    man that was one long download ............right then like the intro, the build is sweet too and the drop is nice .............. the only thing I've noticed is the sub needs a boost it all sounds a bit mid range - I can hear its there but its just not shakin ma bones - however in a club I'm sure this would be different. Like the change in the break downs too nice contrast that somehow works really well - overall a nice tune congrats
     
  6. Nutek

    Nutek movement junglist

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    heavy track bro, however..

    needs much more sub (so it really hits you when it drops), drums need to be punchier too so the track handles well with other tunes, also the bass sound needs to be changed sooner because it becomes very repetitive.

    keep at it mate, i'd love to hear more from you (y)
     
  7. krease

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    yes bruv pure dancefloor murkage, id pull a face if i heard this drop.
    like NuTek said, throw a bass switch up in there and u got a winner.
     
  8. JMDJ

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    Thanks all for your comments!

    your exactly right there nutek. i knew there was a couple of things missing.
    i find it sounds better turned up loud but obviously adding some more bass couldnt hurt ;)

    i will try and add more of a sub bass feel, and i think i could sort out the drums a little bit. will work on this later and then on to the next project ;)

    safe!
     
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  9. dj-dusty

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    not to bad mate, i quite like this
     
  10. BOS

    BOS What Darkness Hides

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    I just looked ad your 2 mix wav and i don’t see that much space for bass or sub, The hole thing seems a bit squashed. Less compression and try brining you’re hi mids down.
     
  11. JMDJ

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    i;ve reworked the whole thing uploading now.
     
  12. Textbook

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    yeah quite a nice track man. get people amped deffinately. im not usually into this type of stuff, but had me nodding away.

    ill listen to it on my speakers a little later. headphones are gash!
     
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    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    sounds good man
     
  14. JMDJ

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    just wait u lot :p the new and improved is garunteed to get your heads bopping....i hope :D

    respect to all the sub bass advisers
     
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  15. vickvega

    vickvega Mr. Blonde

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    am i missing the link somewhere
     
  16. JMDJ

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    nice i like it downloaded and going onto cd =P 7.5/10
     
  18. JMDJ

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    siiick siick :D
     
  19. funkmod

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    haha yeh man if i play it on a set/internet radio or sumfin ill make sure u get the recongition =P
     
  20. JMDJ

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    cheers bruv. means alot! safe!