you see??

[Labrat]

a little progression i wrote the other week i finally made into something, not really dnb, more electronica kinda end of the spectrum.
just playing with some new noises and techniques i guess. feedback welcome

https://soundcloud.com/rorymcpike%2Fyou-see

 

[neddez]

really nice stuff

you nailed the delay timing during the little interludes

only real criticism would be those panned delays during the drum bits sound too separated too me - woulda liked a little more mushy mushy
maybe they could start out as they are and become quicker as the drum section ends - cresendo style

 

[Labrat]

yeah ive had a few people say the panning on the delay is a bit much, might have to fix it up. thanks though

 

[oversight]

like it! maybe pull the panning delay bits in a bit, but i like the fact its bouncing around a bit

nice tune

 

[Elzerk]

yup, put something stable in the middle and pull the stereo delay a bit down.

 

[Labrat]

cheers for taking the time guys