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[DJFallout]

Hey all new on ere been producin for sum time jus gettin a sound I'm happy wiv...hope this isn't classed as advertisin lol... me new rick ro$$ young jeezy jay z remix ! BLAM http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YSZVVTyMKPI

 

[IV4]

meehhh. You are just advertising because you really did not take time to listen and post on other people songs. However, I know you will come back to check out what people said about your track. This is what I will say. Your track is not half bad. Could of been better. For instance I wish the sub bass followed the wobble of your mid-bass. Would give the track more of a feeling(actual bass movement)of flow through bass movements. There is some things you could do with your vocals to make them sound more dynamic. Mix is not bad on my end. Drums could be more interesting. And you could use more cadence.