Drum & Bass Xon - Lily

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Xon, Jul 22, 2012.

  1. Xon

    Xon New Member

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    This is my second track I've ever made.
    It's Liquid DnB so just relax and enjoy. ^_^

     
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    piano chords sound lovely, maybe add another couple of layers to the pad to thicken it up?

    if this is your second tune youve made its very good, there are lots of things that need improving, but that will come with time. youve got the musical elements spot on and imo with liquid thats the most important thing. good stuff mate keep at it.
     
  3. Xon

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    Thank you! and yeah, I was focusing more on the instrumental side of it as opposed to the pads, but I really need to just sit down and experiment to see what sounds good.
     
  4. Neomind

    Neomind Too many skulls!">:O

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    Nice one man, needs a bit of more variation on the hi hats and drums overall too... anyway the chords and everything is lovely ;)

    btw what did you use to make the video and get the low freqs to be drawn??
     
  5. Xon

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    I agree with the variation. Will work on it. :)

    It's a visualizer inside of After Effects. Should be a tutorial on Youtube for it. :bone:
     
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    Very cool track! I really enjoyed the strings and piano especially. The drums sound very clear and punchy. Very nice job.
     
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    like they say, variation and that multiplied kick is not good for me @3:08 but main thing - its a pleasure to listen to this track, to this sounds :) good luck!