Some of its too cheesy I'd say. The feel/synths remind me of The Prodigy circa '92/93. I think you've got too much closed hi hat in this track at certain points. I suppose its kinda growing on me in an oldskool '92 Prodigy style. My feeling is that the break needs to be more a straight sort of rock rhythm type break with snares on the 5 and 13th ... if I'm making sense. Yeah just a little too cheesy for my tastes. I'd probably prefer a stripped down version of this with less of the epic high end synths. A more straight rhythm break would definitely help the dancability of the track too.