x.3- You Are Not Dying

[x.3]

Hello frum rus) im a beginner in dnb and just beginning to understand how to do smthing) can you check this track?) sorry for my english

https://soundcloud.com/x_3%2Fyou-are-not-dying

p.s. the dialog in this track from "Reservoir Dogs" movie in russian translate

pps on soundcloud the sound of track has changed a bit so this is the result of website working?

 

[x.3]

hmm, nothing?

 

[Fishy:)]

Drums are sounding okey man, everything else is sounding like a big giant random mess. Just being honest

 

[msmith222]

Drums are sounding okey man, everything else is sounding like a big giant random mess. Just being honest

this...you have to work on your levels. try and compare each element in your track to a professional song to get a feel for how elements are supposed to relate to each other.

 

[x.3]

thx for feedbacks i'll work in this direction