x.3- You Are Not Dying

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by x.3, Feb 9, 2011.

  1. x.3

    x.3 New Member

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    Hello frum rus) im a beginner in dnb and just beginning to understand how to do smthing) can you check this track?) sorry for my english :D



    p.s. the dialog in this track from "Reservoir Dogs" movie in russian translate

    pps on soundcloud the sound of track has changed a bit so this is the result of website working?
     
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    hmm, nothing? :confused:
     
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    Drums are sounding okey man, everything else is sounding like a big giant random mess. Just being honest:)
     
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    this...you have to work on your levels. try and compare each element in your track to a professional song to get a feel for how elements are supposed to relate to each other.
     
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    thx for feedbacks :) i'll work in this direction :borat: