Writersblock, tried a remix.

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by JimpaDirt, Jan 9, 2013.

  1. JimpaDirt

    JimpaDirt Vettvilling

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    Yeah.. Been having trouble finishing anything lately and I saw the bloody beetroots had this remix competition so I'd thought I'd give it a go but I ran out of producing juice. Intro is dull as fuck and it feels like every part of the track is separated from the rest... And im all out of ideas again.

    So I thought I would leave it here and see if I could get some ideas from u guys. I really want to finnish something soon ;_;




    Edit: New version up ^^^^
     
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    those bass sounds are wicked...love the dry, squelchy qualities they have. composition wise theres enough variation and progression to keep the whole track fresh. Kick n snare samples could be better, which wouldnt be a difficult change.

     
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    Everything about that bass I love. I would marry the bass if I could. I really like this track man. Nothing really helpful to tell you but I enjoyed this a lot.
     
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    Thats yeah wicked bass!
    But in my opinion, the drums are weak and thin for this masssive bass.
    I suggest fatter drum sounds.
    Keep up!
     
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    Cheers guys! I just opened up logic to fiddle some more with this. Will probably upload the final thing tomorrow. I'll see if I can do something about the drums!
     
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    There! new/final version is up.