Work in Progress (Need opinions)

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by JoeCarlse, Feb 11, 2013.

  1. JoeCarlse

    JoeCarlse -ToxicExit09-

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    Recently started a new track, havent made anything in a year, decided i needed to start up again...

    Any opinions on this?

    NEED HONEST FEEDBACK.
     
  2. Rajstah Vibe

    Rajstah Vibe soundcloud.com/rajstah

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    Snare and kick need to be way more present. Level everything down and rise the Snare/Kick.

    Can you add some growling bass?
    I will also stop the piano on the drop and come back on it after 32 bars.
     
  3. Mr_DnB

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    why so slow?

    It sounds really nice in general ;)

    by the way, at 0:44 there is a problem with the filter ;)
     
  4. st420

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    piano sounds nice man. would sound killer i think if after the first 16 bars a big amen break came in! maybe keep the pad going where it cuts out to fill out the mix abit more.

    really nice vibe man keep working at it!
     
  5. JoeCarlse

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    Yeah man i agree, need too work on amen breaks though!! cheers
     
  6. JoeCarlse

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    Cheers, but im sure the drop is at 32 bars?