Work in progress need feedback plsss :)

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by dontcallcook, Nov 30, 2010.

  1. dontcallcook

    dontcallcook New Member

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    Hey need feedback on this work in progress i got goin. The intro and second drop arn't finished yet but feedback on the main part would be great :) not been doin it for long so be kind haha

    http://soundcloud.com/dontcallcook
     
  2. luciduk

    luciduk Active Member

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    very nice intro, drums are tight..

    then bassline just let me down. the main bassline dont sound good to me atall ??

    but then u have these sick bass notes at the end of every 4 bars or something that sound lovely what are u using for those?
    everything in this tune is sick besides that main bassline it doesnt make sense to me how uve made such a good tune with such a wank bassline no offense im just so confused
     
  3. dontcallcook

    dontcallcook New Member

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    well the tune isnt up anymore thats my last one and im sorry if its dissapointing but ive only been at it a few months
     
  4. luciduk

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    no dude it was really good.. sorry i really didnt mean to insult you atall.. the production quality was great, and i did actually say it was a sick tune. i was just suprised it didnt have a sick bass line to go with it !!

    what do u mean its ur last one? it looks like its till up!
     
  5. dontcallcook

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    haha no worries! i was going for a nutone troopers type of bass but maybe it didnt work, only just started getting my head around bass hopefully the next tune will be better :p
     
  6. luciduk

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    alot of potential right ther mate ;) keep posting tunes please !
     
  7. SoveX

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    The bass is there it just needs turning up , maybe add some variations to it aswell that could make the track flow alot more. Beside that the drums are nice and interesting. Keep on working at it!