Work in progress need feedback plsss :)

luciduk

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very nice intro, drums are tight..

then bassline just let me down. the main bassline dont sound good to me atall ??

but then u have these sick bass notes at the end of every 4 bars or something that sound lovely what are u using for those?
everything in this tune is sick besides that main bassline it doesnt make sense to me how uve made such a good tune with such a wank bassline no offense im just so confused
 

dontcallcook

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well the tune isnt up anymore thats my last one and im sorry if its dissapointing but ive only been at it a few months
 

luciduk

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no dude it was really good.. sorry i really didnt mean to insult you atall.. the production quality was great, and i did actually say it was a sick tune. i was just suprised it didnt have a sick bass line to go with it !!

what do u mean its ur last one? it looks like its till up!
 

dontcallcook

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haha no worries! i was going for a nutone troopers type of bass but maybe it didnt work, only just started getting my head around bass hopefully the next tune will be better :P
 

SoveX

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The bass is there it just needs turning up , maybe add some variations to it aswell that could make the track flow alot more. Beside that the drums are nice and interesting. Keep on working at it!
 
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