Work in progress. Feedback appreciated.

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Forau, Apr 24, 2011.

  1. Forau

    Forau CONCUSSION RECS

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    Ive never actually got around to ever finishing a track, but hopefully i'll finish this one :D


    had a fat batch of old dillinja and mampi 12"s arrive a week or so back, and thought id try my hand at that kind of style. Obviously nowhere near touching these absolute legends, but you gotta have dreams right?

    Anyhoo, just wanted to get a bit of feedback on the beat and bassline.



    :)
     
  2. BLoodstaiN`

    BLoodstaiN` Member

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    Bad quality recorded?
     
  3. Simply D.

    Simply D. Polysonic

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    really quiet. but sounds alright man.
     
  4. quentinhiatus

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    Keep at it mang :)
     
  5. msmith222

    msmith222 redbeard

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    try to layer things up a bit (read: a lot) to makes your sounds thicker. you need several more drum layers before the drums will hit hard enough, and you will need a lot of variety and layering in your bass and fx sound as well. keep at it, and youtube is your buddy!
     
  6. Forau

    Forau CONCUSSION RECS

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    Cheers bro :) Appreciate the tips.