Work in progress... any takes on the mix?

[Cor]

Hay.

Got a little piece of a work in progress.
Wondering if any of you had a opinion on the mix... I'm currently stuck with shitty speakers and really, I'm just starting to learn...
So any feed is much appreciated =)

https://soundcloud.com/absinthus%2Fghiet-01

Cheers

 

[Deleted member 85438]

There is so much good in this, i wouldn't worry too much about the mix in general yet just keep doing what your doing and try to listen to as much music as possible, Kick/snare and basses/synths need work (try beefing them up a bit) but i'm sure you'll get there, good work with sound design! And the hats sound great when they all come in!

 

[Deleted member 23164]

dutty.. i like the sample at 0:29.. evil

nice bad mate for shit speakers.. maybe thats why it sounds good to me! lol

 

[Cor]

Cheers guys!

Just uploaded "take" nr.2

https://soundcloud.com/absinthus%2Fgheit-02

 

[Altodnb.]

Nice work man, try beef up your snare, add some drum changes and crank some stereo width in there

 

[Cor]

thanks dude!

 

[Caldeth]

You should EQ that snare for it to sound cleaner.