I think theres way too much silent space in the intro.. the drums sounds really simple, and abit boring. and it sounds like its the same all the time, maybe something more should happened only being honest and trying to help
Yeahh, can't dig this. Can be something good, but you gotta work on the drums, bass and musical part of your track.
Add variations on the guitar and bass, as well for the drums. Try slicing that break loops up in several hits and make your own loops with it, because I think I have exact that loops too.