WIP Untitled Summer Beat Update

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Thin and crispy, Jul 21, 2010.

  1. Thin and crispy

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    I think the transitions need more work, it doesn't feel like the two parts quite fit at the minute. Also needs something else I reckon, maybe a lead synth or vocal or something?
     
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    yer been trying to do a lead that fits but im struggling atm for idea's, the transitions are the parts im most worried about and want feedback on so appreciated :)
     
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    It's nice and I like it, but it lacks a bit of bass. :)
     
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    Nice tune, very laid back. Intro needs a little work I think, more of a build-up then drop maybe? The transition from dnb to house sort of sounds like a smooth mix between two tunes, but not the same track.
    And as Mr Cut said, could do with somethin extra.