WIP, need some feedback

[Rubs90]

Hey there! Been away from the studio for a long time but got back into it today and been working this on and off for the last couple of hours

https://soundcloud.com/tyrant-dnb%2Funfinished-wip

Mixdown is sounding shit, but I'm not sure how to improve it. Anyways guys, give me all your feedback if you have a spare minute

 

[msmith222]

drums are sounding a bit loose, and could cut through a bit more. mixdown just needs an overall workthrough but the idea is solid, keep at it.

 

[equilibrium]

the brights are overpowering everything. lower all the volume levels and then bring up the bass kick and snare. but keep some of the hats with reverb prominent.