(WIP) need feedback

[swinesauce]

this song is about halfway finished (no title yet), obviously needs a lot of mixing/eqing etc, but i need some feedback and ideas for the rest of it. like i'm not really sure where to go with it. (also there's a rogue kick drum near the very end that i can't be bothered to reupload a fixed version of atm, extraneous detail there).

if any parts could use improving on, let me know! thanks!


http://soundcloud.com/esth3r/mehhh-wip