yeh that's what I tend to notice, I try to give some feedback whenever I feel like I can, even with my limited knowledge.
Those are just simple ideas layed down as a foundation, not much processing yet, what I plan to do : add a few more elements like a lead and another pad,
I really gotta work on that bassline, shape it, add variation to the pattern/notes and make it more interesting with some automation for example.
And after that its gonna be essentially arrangements, further processing with each sound, and a nice mixdown.
any Ideas and suggestions are welcome as well