wip a little "darker" than my usual stuff

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Fatkidscantjump, Oct 19, 2013.

  1. Fatkidscantjump

    Fatkidscantjump Member

    Joined:
    Jun 3, 2012
    Messages:
    286
    Likes Received:
    20
    hey guys, went for something a little bit darker/deeper than my usual stuff would like some feedback :) still an early work
    also the intro is kinda meh but i just did it quickly so you dont have the main part right away, i'll change it

    http://soundcloud.com/azoteliquid/wipwipwipw/s-7IUJw

    cheers!
     
  2. padders

    padders Member

    Joined:
    Dec 18, 2008
    Messages:
    101
    Likes Received:
    8
    nice mix very clean, drums are big
     
  3. Menosance

    Menosance aka OSOI

    Joined:
    Apr 3, 2012
    Messages:
    2,044
    Likes Received:
    308
    Location:
    Malta
    Sounds very nice and mix sounds clean as well. If I were you though, I'll give a little bit of more tone to the bass but that could just be my taste :). Overall, sounds very nice and keep on working on it! :D
     
  4. Sovereign

    Sovereign Member

    Joined:
    Sep 23, 2013
    Messages:
    66
    Likes Received:
    10
    Location:
    United States
    Good job so far, sub was nice and weighty and clean! The filtering on the drums during the intro was nice as well.
     
  5. subprime

    subprime Dysjoint

    Joined:
    Feb 2, 2009
    Messages:
    3,087
    Likes Received:
    94
    Location:
    NZ
    Drums are really nice. I had a few listens last night, the guitar was the thing, maybe the sample, or the dubby delays. That was the thing I thought could be improved maybe.
     
  6. Fatkidscantjump

    Fatkidscantjump Member

    Joined:
    Jun 3, 2012
    Messages:
    286
    Likes Received:
    20
    the guitar is a part of the main sample with the strings that i cuted off so i could play it whenever i want, however i couldnt find a 320kpbs version so i had to work with low quality sounds, high freqs were super harsh so I had to EQ a lot, maybe thats why it can sound a bit muddy. Will see what I can do to improve that.

    Thanks to all for the feedback, will work on it and came back with a more advanced (maybe final) version, cheers!