Bass / organ / synth thing isn't coming out very well on my speakers, the top end is really low and the mids sound muddy.
Second part sounds quite a lot like the first part, I like it when it seems like there's a reason to catch the second part as well, maybe it's heavier on the edits, maybe there's some completely new element coming in or maybe the structure is changed up a bit, just something to keep me interested.
Haven't heard the original tune and I can't find it on YouTube so it's a bit hard to C'n'C really..
i have to say im not sure if im a fan of that bassline to me it sounds kinda heavily detuned? or distorted? and i dont thing that it suits this tune also i have to agree with apecat that it lacks something to keep it interesting