DnB What the !!!!

[RjV]

Cut the tune down to size, now 7min track. Also sound's alot diffrent after some good advice by your good self's on here.... So thx.

https://soundcloud.com/rickyvanes%2Fwhat-the-rjv-dnb-mix-full

 

[kdk]

The intro has a lot of energy, but could be shortened by half. I like when the sub drops in a 1:00 or so, but then it goes away at about 2:00 when the melody and samples come in. Then at 2:30 samples and I guess the proper drop? The part from 1:00 to 2:00 could then itself be cut in half, I guess, since it just intros the sub.

The drums are nice and driving, and have good energy.

There are a lot of good vocal samples, but perhaps too many.

I like the FX/samples coming in at about 4:30.

The change up at 5:20 or so is good, but could maybe be even more dramatic. I'm not sure about the shouted grunt coming in at 5:35 or so. It's really nice when you come back to the sub at about 6:20 or so, perhaps you could use a riser or something to accentuate it as a drop. By 7:00, I think the song could easily end here.

There's a lot of good ideas, and most of them hang together really well. I do think many of your sections could be cut, sometimes by as much as half. That would also help to get your song under the 6 minute mark, which I think is a good place to be for a D'n'B track (just my personal opinion of course).

 

[RjV]

Thank's for the top comments made, and will look in to the changes. Easy to save a new file eh ;0) Thank's for feed back.

 

[Mr_DnB]

So much ideas in this track! I would simply cut out some parts because than it would be easier to follow

Some parts sound pretty good to me !

 

[RjV]

Just too many ideas came out lol. Thank for the time taken ;0)

 

[RjV]

Thank's for all comments, hope you like the changes made

 

[RjV]

This tune is like old and new combined.