What is my track missing?

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Blaastrup, Feb 11, 2013.

  1. Blaastrup

    Blaastrup BlazeTroop

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    Been workin on this track, and i personally like it so far, but it needs something.
    I'm not sure what though, i've tried a ton of stuff, but i can't get it to sound right.
    Feedback greaty appreciated, i'm planning on getting my track done within 3 days, for a school project. :)
    What do you think?

     
  2. JoeCarlse

    JoeCarlse -ToxicExit09-

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    What genre are you aiming for with this man?
     
  3. JoeCarlse

    JoeCarlse -ToxicExit09-

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    I think it needs another melody in there somewhere, not sure though!! The drums and the bass are really good though!
     
  4. Blaastrup

    Blaastrup BlazeTroop

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    I'm aiming for some chill neuro stuff bro
     
  5. Rajstah Vibe

    Rajstah Vibe soundcloud.com/rajstah

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    it's missing atmos, pads, textures, fx, some vocal effect, stabs, percussions.. just put some more fantasy...
     
  6. Mr_DnB

    Mr_DnB Member

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    well the part from 22 to 44 seconds takes out the whole power of the "drop" I think.

    To get some variation i would suggest to use this echo sound at the end of the track in the main loop for example.
     
  7. Euph

    Euph New Member

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    This. Try mixing it up a bit, maybe changing the beat up so the snare and kick land on different beats. Add in some higher notes on the sub every now and then for contrast.
     
  8. Balthazaar

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    Little bit variation would be good!