weaving shadows

[maca73]

hey, something I just finished this week any feedback welcome
thanks

https://soundcloud.com/craig973%2Fweaving-shadows

 

[Centrepoint]

Not bad dude, can see what you're trying to do, create a nice roller, it's getting there. I would maybe start the bass with the beat at 2.02 with a more intense drop and put more effects on your sounds, particularly the organ, some delay or reverb maybe? Like the tune vibe, keep it up.

 

[maschinistom]

hello, nice track. i like the groovy bass and rhythm. the drums need some slight variations though, imo.
overall the tune is a bit empty for my taste, but the is just personal preference .. good work from you.

 

[maca73]

thanks for the replies,I will take the advice and see what I can come up with.