We Are (Chris Hawker REMIX)

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Nice work on those synths, sound nice, but they take up alot of room and drown out the drums for me. Nice flow through the song, but also drums could be phatter. and add some space, let the track breath, makes the drop sound bigger as well. all in all, nice work, keep going!
 

Solace

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The voice just before the melody kicks in, is a bit weird
the fast 'we are growing up again'

Agreed to above, the kick could use some work

And I feel that you should get to much distortion, your lead is distorted, you bass too, and one moment I felt like overdistortion (maight just be me)

The drum pattern change at the end feels weird. suddenly that half time... hmm...
 

Quotec

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Very interesting piece of work, I imagine it in some kind of advertisements as a background music. But well, I agree with rest, there is some work to be done with EQing and mixing stuff. Your lead is too heavy, tune it down. Highlight the drums. Add some percussion.

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Sorry I meant that your bass is too heavy.
 
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