W.I.P, feedback wanted

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Blaastrup, Aug 28, 2013.

  1. Blaastrup

    Blaastrup BlazeTroop

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    Hey guys. :)
    Just made this and wanted to know what you think of it so far!
    I'm going for a more jungle style this time. It's not even close to being done, this i just the base song.
    Please tell me what you think, as it's my first time making a track like this :)
     
  2. Mason John

    Mason John 21st Junta

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    You need to fatten up the gain a little, fatten the bass, eq the whistle/spacy sound that winds down (sounds like it's resonance is a bit too high). I like the way you used the amen and the little breaks outside the normal rhythm for it, and composition is sound.

    There can never be enough jungle!
     
  3. Von Herzog

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    cool! i like the style and groove

    but theres something with the mixdown... cant figure out what it is. the sound is maybe too flat?
     
  4. Kealhaul

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    theres alot of unheard low frequency in this but its got a good jungle sound... the bass could go up in the mix alot, and balancing the levels of the diffrent drum sounds would really help this to jump
     
  5. Mr_DnB

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    yeah as sayed above... this track sounds well mate :) but why is it so quiet?
     
  6. 20k

    20k fuck head

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    Great tune, but I'm confused. Your waveform looks like a big meaty sausage but the tune is really quiet?

    Either way I think you should give your bass a little more presence, maybe up the Hz a little so I can hear it properly just through my headphone output