Vocals Help. Does any one know this?

[gabs67]

Hi Fellas,

made a new track and pretty happy with it but just something I wanted to check with someone else the vocals that come in around 0.21 "I don't know if I will make it there" then "I don't know if I will make it there one life" I understand they are meant to be at the correct tempo but do you think they are?

I'm happy with the other vocals its just this section which is repeated that I've been thinking about.

Thanks in advance,

secret(soundcloud.com/cross-0ver/cross-over-euphoria/s-buoiQ)

 

[Bart Barnes]

This is a pretty cool track man, reminds me of Culture Shock.

The vocals would sit better if it was 'I don't know if I'll make it there" rather than "I don't know if I will make it there". Might be able to chop the start of "will" out. Also if you chop this bit out they might sound better starting off beat (like between the kick and the snare).

 

[Neural Tech]

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