Vocal Liquid, Wilkinson-style

[junglistguy2221]

just made this. haven't worked on EQing/mixing/mastering yet, only started an hour ago but think it sounds ok for a start. any feedback welcome

cheers!

https://soundcloud.com/https%3A%2F%2Fsoundcloud.com%2Fchrishawker%2Fforget-feat-samantha-nova

 

[JimpaDirt]

First of I would like to point out that it's hard to give a detailed review to something that isn't mixed, so I wouldn't possibly be able to point out any faults there. And neither the structure as it isn't the full thing either.

I do like the track tho, I think the melody from that saw synth is great. I would maybe try to add in some more percussive elements (or just something) into the downtempo part for the sake of variation. It's sounding good so far, but as I've said the mix is very raw.

 

[junglistguy2221]

yeah. i usually ask for feedback in earlier stages of production so i know whether the song sounds good in terms of the idea/melodies/vibe etc. before i finish the tune. but thanks for your comments, much appreciated! gonna finish the structure and add some changes to make it more interesting before i work on mix.

 

[junglistguy2221]

changed the drums, added another synth layer and done a bit of EQing. any more feedback please?

 

[BattleteK]

Yeah, like this vibe. I'd play/listen it! intrigued for the mastered one!

 

[Northern Seagul]

nice tune, But i don't like vocal :\

 

[torky123]

sounds like its got potential, gotta agree with above tho, not 2 sure on the vocal!

 

[RUSSLA]

Kinda cool idea but I swear the vocal is out of key with the track.. ?