I like it too, very popular this style right now and for a good reason too. This could well suit a proper liquid set between a netsky and fred V tune. But I agree on the bass synth being a bit plain, maybe more mids to it or add more grit to the wobble part.
Sick vocals, only heard this on my mac and the bass comes through nice on the speakers (as nice as a laptop will sound anyway) and in my opinion if the bass isnt stronge enough then it wont come through at all on the laptop speakers.
good work.