Nah don't be sorry man, it's what I'd like to see more of on this forum!:)ok. intro beats sound very keyboard i'm afraid. if you listen to most dnb tunes they dont sound like this. some strange samples in this.
The snare sounds more like a clap mate.
Might sound better with some breaks lightly equed into the beat. Need to layer a lot more into this as there are a lot of empty frequencies, sounds like half a tune.
sorry to be a harsh critique. just wanna help you out.