Violence V.I.P.

[junglistguy2221]

https://soundcloud.com/https%3A%2F%2Fsoundcloud.com%2Fchrishawker%2Fviolence-vip-mix

heard too many times now to go any further. feedback needed please!

cheers.

 

[smoothassilk]

I think your sub is a too loud compared to everything else. Also the wobble seems overly distorted to my taste, but it might be just me.
The whole thing is blurry, could be excessive reverb?
Sorry for excessive harshness...

 

[Forau]

Yeah, i see what smooth's saying. Sounds like its being played through laptop speakers a bit yanno. Like the tune though, distortion is putting me off a bit though. Almost sounds like 192kbps .

 

[junglistguy2221]

Cheers guys. Gonna scrap this one. Resampled my own basslines and overdid the distortion. Will go back to the intro and try something different.